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Proofreading

Good writers are those who keep the language efficient.
That is to say, keep it accurate, keep it clear.
Ezra Pound.

Proofreading corrects misspellings, typos, punctuation, and incorrect or outdated information. It prevents embarrassment and promotes professionalism, as shown in the following examples.

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This year we are doing it all over again and we’ll also be featuring Hearts On Fire’s Sabrina jewlery collcection. This will be an event you do not want to miss!!!  

This year we are doing it all over again. We’ll also be featuring Hearts On Fire’s Sabrina jewelry collection, an event you do not want to miss!!!

The Sabrina line has several types of jewelry from pendants to bangles, and rings, to earrings. (See pages 4-5) they have also created and extraordinary elegant diamond Decadence Necklace which is set with over 13 cts. of the most brilliant diamonds that dance with light and catches the eyes attention immediately, and fills you with a sensation of AW!!!

The Sabrina line has several types of jewelry from pendants to bangles, rings, and earrings (see pages 4–5). They have also created an extraordinary and elegant diamond Decadence Necklace set with over 13 cts. of the most brilliant diamonds that dance with light, catch the eye immediately, and fill you with a sensation of AWE!!!

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Without Janis, I would be lost! She has saved me so much time in creating our monthly newsletters.  She always helps me out when I have a tight schedule. She delivers my proofs as quickly as possible and sometimes in a matter of hours! I can always count on her to deliver great work!  Thanks, Janis!!! You’re the best!!!

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